Do You Like My (Story) So Far? I started writing two months ago but never got back to it, had alot to do.?

The gray tea kettle whistled loudly and shaked violently as if frightened. The elderly man hurried swiftly over to grab a little green towel with penny sized holes and lifted the scorching hot kettle, nearly dropping it when he was burned on his palm due to a one of a tiny hole he never noticed. The old man grabbed two cups with engraved designs of dragons breathing fire on each one.He sat down in front of a small chestnut colored table, with his legs crossed. After pouring tea into both cups, he passed one of them over to Koshima and began.





%26quot;Nice to meet you, I am Mr. Seztu%26quot; His voice was deep and cheerful. Koshima was surpised at how fast he could speak, Mr. Setzu%26#039;s appearance made him think he%26#039;d have a dry and shaky voice. He had wrinkles . %26quot;And You Are? While take a big sip of his tea.





%26quot;I-I%26#039;m Koshima...%26quot; Suddenly feeling dumb for not saying his last name, but it seemed that Mr. Setzu didn%26#039;t notice.





%26quot;How old are you, Koshima?%26quot; He said while





%26quot;I%26#039;m si-sixteen, sir%26quot;





He kept his voice serious,%26quot;So, you would like to fulfill the tasks that many strived for, yet never suceeded.%26quot; Koshima nodded, surprised a bit by the %26quot;never%26quot; part. %26quot; A countless number of people thought they had what was needed to complete these challenges. Many suggested that being physically powerful and having the toughest weapons in, the tasks would be simple. When actually stealth, speed, cleverness, and patience is very, very important indeed.%26quot; Mr. Setzu%26#039;s expression looked of dissapointment.





%26quot;Over years it%26#039;s pained me to witness that so many returned to admit they have given up, seems that they%26#039;ve let rumored stories of others%26#039; deaths get to them.%26quot; He sighed, %26quot; Hopefully you won%26#039;t end up like the others who ran off with their tail between their legs..cowards.%26quot; I%26#039;d bet if it were you there you%26#039;d react the same way, Koshima thought. Mr. Setzu%26#039;s voice suddenly cheerful again,%26quot;...but it doesn%26#039;t seem like your interested in my old stories, eh?%26quot; he chuckled.





Koshima half-heartedly laughed, most of the time Mr. Setzu spoke, Koshima%26#039;s eyes kept zipping from Mr. Setzu%26#039;s dark brown eyes to a moth flying around an open window, to a young girl that looked just about Koshima%26#039;s age. She had bun held by two sticks with a little bit of hair left out on each side of her face with a slanted cut. While Koshima had the time he quickly flashed his eye%26#039;s upon the girl%26#039;s luxorious black hair glistening in the sun like a daimond. She also wore a beautiful silver necklace with four little red rubies on the front, Koshima suddenly felt embarrassed that he wore a neclace made with string decorated with a shark tooth on the front that he found at a beach years ago.

Do You Like My (Story) So Far? I started writing two months ago but never got back to it, had alot to do.?
You have the start of something here, but you need an editor
Reply:Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I L-O-V-E IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!
Reply:I lost interest on the first sentence. Sorry, but the truth hurts.



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